Imperishable Inheritance

I made my first attempt at translating a passage from Greek to English. Now, I have no training in Greek exegesis, so this is my attempt with using Strong's and the New American Standard Exhaustive Concordance. My version is called the "Heresy Version" (he-he) contrasted with the NASV and a literal translation.

So no one conform to this age to nevertheless transform the renewing the mind continual the discern your what the will of God the good and acceptable and perfect.
Heresy Version (Mine)

And be not conformed to this age, but be transformed by the renewing of your mind, in order to prove by you what is the good and pleasing and perfect will of God.
Literal Translation of the Holy Bible

And do not be conformed to this world, but be transformed by the renewing of your mind, so that you may prove what the will of God is, that which is good and acceptable and perfect.
New American Standard Version