Translation Attempted: Romans 12:2

I made my first attempt at trans­lat­ing a pas­sage from Greek to Eng­lish. Now, I have no train­ing in Greek exe­ge­sis, so this is my attempt with using Strong’s and the New Amer­i­can Stan­dard Exhaus­tive Con­cor­dance. My ver­sion is called the “Heresy Ver­sion” (he-he) con­trasted with the NASV and a lit­eral translation.

So no one con­form to this age to nev­er­the­less trans­form the renew­ing the mind con­tin­ual the dis­cern your what the will of God the good and accept­able and per­fect.
Heresy Ver­sion (Mine)

And be not con­formed to this age, but be trans­formed by the renew­ing of your mind, in order to prove by you what is the good and pleas­ing and per­fect will of God.
Lit­eral Trans­la­tion of the Holy Bible

And do not be con­formed to this world, but be trans­formed by the renew­ing of your mind, so that you may prove what the will of God is, that which is good and accept­able and per­fect.
New Amer­i­can Stan­dard Version